What I Have Come To Realise

I have come to realise that life is not a wall   
but rather a mountain 
that takes time, perservence and persistence to get to the top 
that it isnt easy to climb 
and there may be rocks and poo along the way 
that may cause you to slip and trip 
but you gain your balance 
take a deep breath and keep on climbing 
and although it looks so steep 
and the slips and trips may be the end of the world at the time
if you keep on going one step at a time 
before you know it you realise have conquered your climb
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 25, 2010 at 8:47 AM
Well done! That boggy mud is the worst... ruins your shoes and pants.
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