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What I Gave

Audacious you ask
After gaining all I had;
What I gave to you


Senryu: syl count 5/7/5
Date: 26.6.2014
Mohan Chutani

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Faye Gibson

July 14, 2014 at 1:24 PM

Great, Mohan. Congratulations on your win.

Mohan Chutani

July 15, 2014 at 10:38 AM

Faye, thanks for lovely wishes. Mohan

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 14, 2014 at 10:44 AM

Mohan that's a brilliant one! Congrats on a deserved very witty winning poem!

Mohan Chutani

July 15, 2014 at 10:39 AM

Upma, thanks for appreciating. Mohan

Paul Callus

July 14, 2014 at 8:51 AM

You make a good point here, Mohan! No answer needed! Congrats on a fine win. // paul

Mohan Chutani

July 15, 2014 at 10:37 AM

Thanks Paul for the appreciation of the point. Mohan

Sara Kendrick

June 28, 2014 at 1:15 PM

Great work..Very unique and descriptive work..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara

Mohan Chutani

June 28, 2014 at 10:52 PM

Sara, thank you for your valued appreciation. Mohan

Andrea Dietrich

June 27, 2014 at 9:47 PM

very inventive way to do the challenge. Wished I had thought of something like this!

Mohan Chutani

June 28, 2014 at 10:54 PM

Andrea, this three liner was somehow spontaneous. Mohan

Verlena S. Walker

June 27, 2014 at 9:21 PM

Nice write Mohan... Enjoyed... Verlena

Mohan Chutani

June 28, 2014 at 10:56 PM

Thanks Verlena. Mohan

Dr.Ram Mehta

June 26, 2014 at 8:02 PM

Quite a witty and dark humor take on the theme of the contest, Mohan

Mohan Chutani

June 26, 2014 at 8:05 PM

Thanks Dr. Ram for your appreciation. Mohan

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