What Have We Become

I took a walk in the city 
watched the people that I passed. 
Took a real good look 
then started to do the math. 

Not many paid the time 
to give a smile or even a nod. 
Barreling right through my path 
chins tucked down, ears plugged in 
barely stepping to the side. 

How is it we’ve become so disconnected 
from our fellow man... 
plugged in 
turned on 
zoned in 
turned up 
tuned out 
Too bothered with our devices… 
checking in 
chatting up 
updating our pages 
Distracted from the world around us. 

I pondered all of this as I went 
the lack of courtesy of years gone by. 
Realizing how accustom we’ve become 
with just civility, even on that you can’t rely. 
When now a simple please or thank you 
has become a rare affair. 

So as I walked the sun got higher 
the morning streets filled up. 
And a woman caught my eye 
with large boxes piled high. 
I could see she only managed just 
so I did a quick check round. 
There were plenty men to spare 
But not a single one offered aid 
not a helping hand was found. 
None could bother to be delayed 
as they continued on their way. 

Gone the days of curtsy 
a tip of the hat is just not that 
of something you still see. 
Chivalry is dead they say 
and I’m starting to believe. 
The manners that once were 
are gone and never to be seen. 

That what started as a silly game 
a way to pass the time. 
Quickly turned my day a sour, 
damaging my confidence 
in that of our mankind. 

I decide to treat myself 
before heading home. 
A little coffee pick me up 
is sure to get me feeling fine. 

As I reached for the door 
there’s a hand that brushes mine. 
Looking up I see a handsome guy 
with a flash of smile in his eye. 
“After you!” he says 
and gestures to go ahead. 
I thank the man, somewhat stunned 
and make my way on by. 

Warm with its creamy taste 
I savor my hot treat. 
And think maybe, just maybe 
death has yet to come 
to common decency.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 1/31/2012 11:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poetry this week!
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Date: 1/31/2012 10:06:00 AM
This is so true!! Thanks for writing this :)
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Date: 1/30/2012 10:17:00 PM
Well deserved. Great write. Nice job =)
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Date: 1/30/2012 6:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poetry this week Cristy. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/26/2012 12:13:00 AM
Chivalry is still found in my small town.And I'm trying to bring it back.Holding the door for wife,elderly,anyone who needs a hand.With a little smile and nod.I have held the door for younger people,and they look at me like what are you doing?Ha,ha.But I know what your saying...It's a shame :o(
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Date: 1/26/2012 1:18:00 AM
It really is a shame there isn't more of it still out there.. but I'm glad to hear you're doing your part! Thanks for the read and comment!!
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