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What Have U Done?

Happiness Erased Smiles faded From my face Replaced with Anger and hate My days Dark and cold 'Cuz U got Such a powerful hold My heart Broken My dreams Shattered My life Unclear I see me Not the real me What have U done?

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John Heck

Date: 12/27/2008 10:03:00 AM

Breana - Congratulations on your feature this week! Wishing you a Happy & Healthy New Year. Peace always, John

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 12/23/2008 5:04:00 PM

Congratulations Breana on being featured this week. Vince

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/23/2008 1:13:00 PM

POWERFULL! POWERFULL! more that congradulations are do . you have grabed the attention of many with the intencity of this piece. very very well done. John H. Loving III

Amy Swanson

Date: 12/23/2008 8:41:00 AM

Hi Breana *^_^* I really like the message in this, it is so true; I have experienced this myself in my own life, you captured it well, that feeling of someone trying to change you and make you be what you are not. Got to hold on to you but it's hard sometimes when others around you have more powerful personalities. As Shakespeare said, "To Thine Own Self Be True!" Your poem really helps convey this, excellent. God bless and Congrats! on getting featured! Happy Holidays! Amy :)

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/22/2008 8:56:00 PM

Congrats on being featured this week, Happy Holidays...Raul

Barbara Washington

Date: 12/22/2008 7:41:00 PM

this was a ggood write, congrats on being featured.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 12/22/2008 7:30:00 PM

Breana,Congratulations on YOUR FEATURED POEM "What Have U Done?" I think the mold has been broken such a shame Happy Holidays...HG

Date: 12/22/2008 3:21:00 PM

It like the way you use short lines to convey your message. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen

Mickey Pig Knuckles

Date: 12/22/2008 8:20:00 AM

Breana, its amazing how another can shape and sometimes mold us into something we don't know as you have penned a wonderful message here for your readers to savor. Congratulations for being featured and Thank You for sharing your gift of writing and especially for giving us a small part of yourself. May you have a safe and love filled holiday... MPK

Michael Jordan

Date: 12/22/2008 12:21:00 AM

Breana - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ

Sharon Winter

Date: 12/21/2008 3:44:00 PM

Congratulations on your featured write of the week! Warmest wishes for a beautiful holiday! Love, Shar

Ali Matheny

Date: 12/9/2008 6:38:00 PM

Wanna be friends? Love Alexz >.<

Ali Matheny

Date: 12/9/2008 5:46:00 PM

So Deep!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! Love Alexz ^_^ >.<