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What Have U Done?

Happiness
Erased
Smiles faded
From my face
Replaced with
Anger and hate
My days 
Dark and cold
'Cuz U got
Such a powerful hold
My heart
Broken
My dreams
Shattered
My life 
Unclear
I see me 
Not the real me
What have U done?

sadi do not know?

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John Heck

December 27, 2008 at 10:03 AM

Breana - Congratulations on your feature this week! Wishing you a Happy & Healthy New Year. Peace always, John

Vince Suzadail Jr.

December 23, 2008 at 5:04 PM

Congratulations Breana on being featured this week. Vince

John Loving Iii

December 23, 2008 at 1:13 PM

POWERFULL! POWERFULL! more that congradulations are do . you have grabed the attention of many with the intencity of this piece. very very well done. John H. Loving III

Amy Swanson

December 23, 2008 at 8:41 AM

Hi Breana *^_^* I really like the message in this, it is so true; I have experienced this myself in my own life, you captured it well, that feeling of someone trying to change you and make you be what you are not. Got to hold on to you but it's hard sometimes when others around you have more powerful personalities. As Shakespeare said, "To Thine Own Self Be True!" Your poem really helps convey this, excellent. God bless and Congrats! on getting featured! Happy Holidays! Amy :)

Raul Moreno

December 22, 2008 at 8:56 PM

Congrats on being featured this week, Happy Holidays...Raul

Barbara Washington

December 22, 2008 at 7:41 PM

this was a ggood write, congrats on being featured.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

December 22, 2008 at 7:30 PM

Breana,Congratulations on YOUR FEATURED POEM "What Have U Done?" I think the mold has been broken such a shame Happy Holidays...HG

December 22, 2008 at 3:21 PM

It like the way you use short lines to convey your message. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen

Mickey Pig Knuckles

December 22, 2008 at 8:20 AM

Breana, its amazing how another can shape and sometimes mold us into something we don't know as you have penned a wonderful message here for your readers to savor. Congratulations for being featured and Thank You for sharing your gift of writing and especially for giving us a small part of yourself. May you have a safe and love filled holiday... MPK