Notes About The Poem

What hangs in the balance

A moon hanging low amidst the glitter of stars,
my heart's aflutter with dire anticipation.
Together we cast golden coins in a fountain,
the darkness of the night oozing with mystery.

My heart's aflutter with dire anticipation,
the unmistakable scent of love fills the air.
Always the thought of you occupying my mind
till I summon your familiar voice in the night.

Together we cast golden coins in a fountain.
What follows is a future completely unknown
fraught with questions and answers that put us on edge,
and beyond the horizon no news, not a glimpse.

The darkness of the night oozing with mystery,
wishing for the best we will not settle for less.
We hope and we pray as we offer our plans to
a moon hanging low amidst the glitter of stars.



(this form is called Retourne)

AP: 3rd place 2025, Honorable Mention 2025, Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Blown Avatar
May 11, 2025 at 3:55 PM
the moon be like one big shiny coin.... len
Gauthier Avatar
May 11, 2025 at 5:39 PM
Yes, the biggest one up in the sky ~ lol
Bayles Avatar
May 11, 2025 at 10:34 AM
The imagery here is wonderful.
Gauthier Avatar
May 11, 2025 at 5:38 PM
Thanks, Mike. Much appreciated ~
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