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What Do You See

What do you see? you see me. You see me going by, going right up into the sky. You see me telling puppy dog tales, the tales just went into the mail. Oh my, what did I do? I just wrote to you. The mailbox is crying, so now I am sighing. My tongue is retiring, so I will stop trying. Date: 1/12/20/20 Written

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/15/2020 2:30:00 PM

Entertainment tonight! Thanks, Paula! Smiles, Gershon

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/15/2020 3:13:00 PM

Glad you like it. I thought it was cute. Take Care......

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/12/2020 9:26:00 PM

Fun poem, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/13/2020 9:08:00 AM

It was fun to write. Thanks for stopping and reading. Enjoy your day writing.....................

Sandra Adams

Date: 1/12/2020 6:39:00 PM

this started out cute and then went poignant...probably because i feel it's about your brother... wonderful penning Paula, even with the sadness.... hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/12/2020 7:01:00 PM

Thanks for your note. It is not about my brother. It was just a fun write. Glad you like it. It was not to be sad. It was to be funny. Hugs and enjoy writing.........