What Do You See

What do you see?                                                                                                                you see me.                                                                                                                        You see me going by,                                                                                                                going right up into the sky.                                                                                                   You see me telling puppy dog tales,                                                                                      the tales just went into the mail.                                                                                            Oh my, what did I do?                                                                                                              I just wrote to you.                                                                                                              The mailbox is crying,                                                                                                            so now I am sighing.                                                                                                                  My tongue is retiring,                                                                                                                so I will stop trying.

Date: 1/12/20/20 Written
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Wolf Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 2:30 PM
Entertainment tonight! Thanks, Paula! Smiles, Gershon
Goldsmith Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 3:13 PM
Glad you like it. I thought it was cute. Take Care......
Gauthier Avatar
January 12, 2020 at 9:26 PM
Fun poem, Paula.
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January 13, 2020 at 9:08 AM
It was fun to write. Thanks for stopping and reading. Enjoy your day writing.....................
Adams Avatar
January 12, 2020 at 6:39 PM
this started out cute and then went poignant...probably because i feel it's about your brother... wonderful penning Paula, even with the sadness.... hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
January 12, 2020 at 7:01 PM
Thanks for your note. It is not about my brother. It was just a fun write. Glad you like it. It was not to be sad. It was to be funny. Hugs and enjoy writing.........
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