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What Do I Need?

What Do I Need? I need a moment, Just to inhale I’ll take a breath or two then I will slowly exhale. I need a moment to think a thought, To dream a dream, before the dream is shot. I need a moment to shed a tear, To remember my loved ones who are no longer here. I need a moment to speak to my soul, I will tell it to wake up before I grow old!! I need a moment to remember who I married He is the rock I can cling to when life is harried. I need a moment to just be ME!! To look where I may and see what I see. Can I Please have that moment? Will you give it to me? I would cherish that moment, when I could be free!!!

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Date: 5/21/2016 9:33:00 AM
Pamela Ellis, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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Date: 10/28/2009 8:50:00 AM
It "the moment" is already given, and heaven help any man, woman or beast, that would try to take it from you. Take your moment now for it is God who has given. Very well written, an awesome poem. Smile! Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 10/28/2009 8:12:00 AM
To me this is a very moving poem I liked how the words fit together so smooth and the power you put into them good work
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