What Did We Do Wrong

A small caterpillar was questing for the food
It entered the obscure region to search
Fortunately a man escorted the kid
and kept it in a box to end its quench

It was like a bolt from the blue 
to see the box full of caterpillars
They enjoyed well and never knew,
the man who escorted, was the killer

The pupal stage had come
Every caterpillars dreamed to fly,
entered into the cocoon home
promised one another to meet in the sky

The man suddenly wrenched the chrysalis
immersed them in the hot water
and annihilated the pupas and their dreams.
He is doing the business of sericulture

He used to rescue the eggs of silkworms,
rear it merrily like a mother feeds the milk
wait until they attain the pupal form,
put in hotwater to separate the threads to make silk

Poor silkworms in the hotwater died.
Their dreams were long 
and their desires were wide
They asked people,"What did we do wrong"?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Nusker Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 11:22 PM
A very thought provoking write. Congrats on your win, Supraja.
Kannan Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 9:34 AM
Thank you so much....
Raynes Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 11:21 PM
What a wonderful idea, a wonderful aspect. Congratulations on ur win.
Kannan Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 9:33 AM
Thank you so much...Its a great surprise...Thank u again..Glad you liked it...
Trifiatis Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 9:47 AM
A poem that the fate of almost every animal is reflected dear, Supraja. A lot of food for thought has your writing provided! Well done! Welcome!
Kannan Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 9:39 AM
True... Since I am raising butterflies,I can see their pain during metamorphism...So I can't tolerate this...
Dietrich Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 9:43 AM
giving a human touch to the demise of these poor creatures. I hope they cannot feel this dreadful fate in the same way a human does. (silk is so beautiful. Creatures die for us all the time and it's awful to think if they have great feelings of pain!!)
Kannan Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 9:35 AM
It's just my thought...we can't do anything to stop these...
Shanmugam Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 9:03 AM
So nice supraja:)
Kannan Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 9:31 AM
Thank you Madhu...
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