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What Did I Do?

Hurt Betrayed my heart is twisted I can't breathe my heart hurts too much I love him so much what did i do wrong? what did i say for him to be mad at me? I miss him I love him he is the love of my life I want to cry, but i can't my eyes are glistening my heart is twisted my stomach is turning I'm heart broke I don't even know what I did wrong I love him

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Date: 1/15/2009 12:15:00 PM
I am not familiar with this form, but I love the flow of it. The theme in this piece is very clear and the heartache is evident...nice imagery..good write.
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