What Did I Do?

Hurt
Betrayed
my heart is twisted
I can't breathe my heart hurts too much
I love him so much
what did i do wrong?
what did i say for him to be mad at me?
I miss him
I love him
he is the love of my life
I want to cry, but i can't
my eyes are glistening
my heart is twisted
my stomach is turning
I'm heart broke
I don't even know what I did wrong
I love him
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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January 15, 2009 at 12:15 PM
I am not familiar with this form, but I love the flow of it. The theme in this piece is very clear and the heartache is evident...nice imagery..good write.
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