What Destroys You

You will think of me
when your mouths collide,
for your body will become numb.

Her breath will wither
like smoke in the air,
and I will fill your lungs.

Like blood in your mouth
you will taste my lips,
I am the poison on her tongue.

What destroys you 
is not our demise,
but the calm before the storm.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Agustin Avatar
March 5, 2024 at 10:17 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 5, 2016 at 5:19 PM
:) SKAT
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February 5, 2016 at 2:22 PM
R Williams, hope to see you post again. this was a great write. LINDA
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May 27, 2015 at 5:10 PM
Rhiannon, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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May 27, 2015 at 4:32 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Rhiannon :) - Most arts demands training (we learn from each other), for me it is important to share and delight others - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us - I wish you good luck: ) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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May 26, 2015 at 5:10 PM
Rhiannon, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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May 26, 2015 at 12:13 PM
by far my favorite poem that i read today on here! loveloveloveloveLOVE
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