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What Caught My Eye

It was her tender touch One that made my blood rush It was her pretty smile That made me walk the mile It was her silky hair One that gave me more flair It was her truthful eyes One that made known my lies Her calculated steps Did away with all flirts It was her melodies One that gave me sweet treats Her warmth that breaks cool ice All these, caught my eyes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/28/2012 1:38:00 PM
this is lovely... i enjoyed reading it.... thanks for sharing....smiles...chiquita
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Date: 5/1/2012 10:21:00 AM
thanks
Date: 4/25/2012 6:45:00 PM
awww very untraditional..last line {All these, caught my eye} would work a wee bit better and I feel this would be even better presented as a ballad..it wants to be a ballad..listen to it? Light & love
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Date: 4/25/2012 10:25:00 AM
Smile ˜ As a mother cherishes her precious child ˜ Loving they and everything begins changing colours * Love always, John!:) ˜
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