Lord Addo-Yobo Poet Ballad

What Caught My Eye

It was her tender touch
One that made my blood rush
It was her pretty smile
That made me walk the mile
It was her silky hair
One that gave me more flair
It was her truthful eyes
One that made known my lies
Her calculated steps
Did away with all flirts
It was her melodies
One that gave me sweet treats
Her warmth that breaks cool ice
All these, caught my eyes

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Chiquitachiamaka Baity April 28, 2012 at 1:38 PM this is lovely... i enjoyed reading it.... thanks for sharing....smiles...chiquita Lord Addo-Yobo May 1, 2012 at 10:21 AM thanks

Debbie Guzzi April 25, 2012 at 6:45 PM awww very untraditional..last line {All these, caught my eye} would work a wee bit better and I feel this would be even better presented as a ballad..it wants to be a ballad..listen to it? Light & love

John Rhinem April 25, 2012 at 10:25 AM Smile ˜ As a mother cherishes her precious child ˜ Loving they and everything begins changing colours * Love always, John!:) ˜