What Catches the Eye

What first catches my eye Is a word…or a phrase That exerts a pull realized Upon entering a maze An air of adventure That’s what it’s about Where will this word lead you Where will it come out? The word is but a poem’s foundation It’s only the start The essential beginning Yet only a part As in a colorful flower The single essence (the aforementioned word) That as nectar is added Draws into it’s presence Fill out and embellish The complement of bees (lil’ pollen thieves) the blooming poem flower As leaves do the trees Until the word has taken A life of it’s own Become more than a word And much more like a poem It’s taken a little imagination, It’s taken a little effort (and maybe an hour) To turn a little word into a thing of fascination This poem I’ve created? I think I shall call it …”Flower”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kelley Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 11:29 PM
Very imaginative...I like it
Sergi Avatar
December 14, 2013 at 8:25 PM
David very creative work
Kamau Avatar
December 12, 2013 at 5:29 PM
Deep poem right there.
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