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What Can I Do?

I sit there watching you walk in and say a few words hug us and leave. What can I do? I feel the distance of you and I. I regret doing many things. Maybe if I did my chores, recieved better grades, maybe you would have stayed. What can I do?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/11/2010 2:51:00 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Tara. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/8/2010 4:28:00 PM
A fathers love is unconditional. Sometimes they just dont know what to say. good write.
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Date: 7/8/2010 4:00:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Family.. so enjoyed your creative write tonight.. with luv.. "Sweetheart"
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