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What Are You Doing

"what Are You Doing" What are you doing Who are you fooling You take each day You throw it away What are you doing Look In the mirror What do you see Is it a stranger You can't conceive Long ago You were a star Time has passed Here you are Each day a challenge A win A lose Competing For you to choose Love who you are Be a star Cherish each day Live life your way A strong hand Is here for you To move you forward To guide you through Take a moment You can choose With direction You can't lose What Are You Doing.. What Are You Doing 11/11/14 D

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Date: 11/25/2014 1:47:00 PM
Great write D.C.....and right to the point...Well done! :)Ana
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D. C.
Date: 4/22/2015 4:12:00 PM
Thanks for your comments..
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Date: 4/22/2015 3:54:00 PM
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Date: 11/11/2014 2:30:00 PM
A deep introspection in this poem,awesome.
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Date: 4/22/2015 4:13:00 PM
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D. C.
Date: 11/21/2014 2:58:00 AM
Thank you..

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