What Are You Doing

"what Are You Doing"

What are you doing
Who are you fooling
You take each day
You throw it away
What are you doing

Look In the mirror
What do you see
Is it a stranger
You can't conceive

Long ago 
You were a star
Time has passed
Here you are

Each day a challenge
A win
A lose
Competing
For you to choose

Love who you are
Be a star
Cherish each day
Live life your way 

A strong hand
Is here for you 
To move you forward
To guide you through

Take a moment
You can choose
With direction 
You can't lose 
What Are You Doing..

             What Are You Doing 11/11/14
                                                 D
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Espinola Collins Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 1:47 PM
Great write D.C.....and right to the point...Well done! :)Ana
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April 22, 2015 at 4:12 PM
Thanks for your comments..
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April 22, 2015 at 3:54 PM
Thanks for your comments..
Chircop Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 2:30 PM
A deep introspection in this poem,awesome.
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April 22, 2015 at 4:13 PM
Thanks for your comments..
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November 21, 2014 at 2:58 AM
Thank you..
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