Premiere Contest WinnerWhat An Upside-Down World It's Become

(written to be sung to the tune of “What a Wonderful World it Would Be” as sung by Sam Cooke, but I first heard it in the 60's by Herman's Hermits)

Don’t know much about politics.
Only know there are lots of di#ks.
Hardly know why these kinds of guys
cause division and lead with lies.

But I do know the things I see.
One and one don’t add up to three.
What an upside-down world it’s become.

Not for certain about anything.
Whistle blowers are afraid to sing!
Trust no CDC or FBI.
Do they really protect us? (sigh)

But I do know the things I see.
One and one don’t add up to three.
What an upside-down world it’s become.

Well, I saw many prices rising fast.
But what did Biden say?
Blamed it all on Russia and smiled with big teeth.
I’m shocked by now we’ve not collapsed!

I do know about history.
Never long lives prosperity.
Loony speeches leave me with no doubt,
and I’m hoping that all truth will out!

For I do know the things I see.
One and one cannot add up to three.
What an upside-down world it’s become.

Dum dum dum dum dum dum dum (politics)
dum dee dum dee dum dee dum dee dum dee  (lying guys)
Hmm  Hmmmm – all those di#ks.
Have a burger with some fries . . .

And enjoy it while you can.
Reset’s coming. Will you have a dime?
What an upside-down world it’s become.
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Fisher Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 4:54 PM
Very cool poem(song) that won! I like how you pointed out some of the psychological plays that the 'powers that shouldn't be' use.
Volumes Avatar
November 1, 2023 at 12:24 PM
Very Clever, enjoyed ! Congrats
Maverick Avatar
December 21, 2022 at 1:13 PM
Great result on 1st Andrea,' I just pulled my Blanket a but tighter, theres a bad chill out there For sure' I only just found the contest results Didn't pull them up last week though I tried'
Sands Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 1:26 PM
Great one Andrea ! Congratulations :)
Miller Avatar
December 19, 2022 at 12:35 AM
A fun and worthy winner, congratulations Andrea!
Daniel Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 10:55 PM
Congratulations on a clever write, and win, Andrea:)
Alex Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 9:44 PM
Clever satiric and ironic. True critics of politics. My nation too is never the less. Lies mount like his. Unfulfilled promises turn into divide-and-rule... Very beautiful writing. Congratulations!
Dietrich Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 10:41 PM
Thanks, my friend.
Bianco Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 9:40 PM
Hi Andrea, Great entry with a melodic bend. You somehow managed to be sincere and funny without being mean spirited. Well done. Anthony
Dietrich Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 10:38 PM
Thanks, Anthony. Much appreciated
Canerdy Avatar
December 14, 2022 at 8:50 AM
I've reached the point where the thought of politics makes me cringe! Andrea, this is VERY well done! Janice
Gregory Avatar
December 12, 2022 at 7:02 PM
A view on the rude awakening taking place on a global level...Damian Marley did a song name “Its mind control“, yours has a similar flow, Reggae notwithstanding. Nicely done.
Dietrich Avatar
December 13, 2022 at 12:09 AM
thanks, I may have heard that song you refer to and if it's the one I am thinking, he really knows his stuff.
Summers Avatar
December 12, 2022 at 6:06 PM
Most interesting, upside down indeed and I don’t see it righting itself anytime soon. You’ve raised some interesting thoughts. And by the way, using an old Herman’s Hermits tune for your lyrics was a nice touch. John
Dietrich Avatar
December 13, 2022 at 12:09 AM
thanks, Herman was my "first crush" on a pop star.
Hawley Avatar
December 12, 2022 at 4:27 PM
I hope you win high on this one.
Dietrich Avatar
December 13, 2022 at 12:09 AM
thanks so much, Miranda
Buhagiar Avatar
December 12, 2022 at 10:03 AM
I don't comment much on politics. They are all corrupt.
Dietrich Avatar
December 12, 2022 at 10:24 AM
So true
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