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What An Amazing World This Would Be

The world keeps spinning day after day But the one thing always remains constant It's love sweet love, nothing's more enduring The only thing we've ever wanted Nothing replaces it not one single thing It's the most ultimate enjoyment of mankind The reason we breathe, it's why we exist All the good things in life combined As hard as we try nothing can replace it Since this big old world first began spinning It's the real reason us guys were created The reason we're constantly grinning Imagine a world where love didn't exist Could we handle the constant upheaval If you think the world's filled with hatred now Our life would be beyond retrievable So let us all pray that pure love continues And one day we'll all live in peace What a wonderful amazing world that would be When hatred would finally cease

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Date: 3/31/2023 5:11:00 PM
good point...the 'pull-it-tickles'....laugh when their social issues make the people itch for arguments......stan
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/31/2023 6:22:00 PM
Thanks a bunch, Stan my friend! Will it ever be any different?
Date: 3/31/2023 12:44:00 PM
Looking around me the world needs a lot of it right now. Hope you are keeping well Jack. Been away for a week with the family, the travelling season has begun. Tom
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/31/2023 12:56:00 PM
What an amazing life you lead Mr.Tom! Wowsers! Some guys have it all! OOOEEE!
Date: 3/31/2023 11:21:00 AM
Hello Happy Jack, it would be nice to see the world have love instead of hate. Yes what the world needs now is Love!! Not hate. I always pray for peace. Love, /Darlene\xxxx-oooo.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/31/2023 3:58:00 PM
Hello Happy Jack, yes it would be paradise. Love,/ Darlene/ xxxx oooooo.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/31/2023 12:58:00 PM
Would be paradise!!! Love, Happy Jack XOX
Date: 3/31/2023 8:41:00 AM
You are so right Jack. I love your poem and the message. Unfortunately for every good there is a bad, without hate, love would lose it's meaning.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/31/2023 10:51:00 AM
Hey Dan! Good is not ever alone... it's needs a balance unfortunately! Cheers!
Date: 3/31/2023 5:24:00 AM
Jack, that is a.wonderful poem. Peace on earth, can't give up on hope ever. If there wasn't love, none of us would be here. Great flow. Keep Rolling??
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/31/2023 6:18:00 AM
Much appreciated my friend!!! PEACE
Date: 3/31/2023 4:57:00 AM
Love takes so many forms dearest Jack. The love of a child, a friend, a pet, a flower, a scent and of cause a partner. It really does make the world go round. Lovely poem Jack
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/31/2023 5:04:00 AM
Thank you my sweet! What a peaceful loving world this would be! Will it ever happens... hmmm! Love from the Jolly Canuck@ XOXOX

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