Amily Watson Poet I do not know?

What Am I

No one has seen me,
They have looked. 
So long I've waited,
So long I've hooked,
A piece of my soul,
To drops of loneliness;
A piece of my soul,
To lines of deadlines.

The rain is falling,
Water drowns the room.
The sky has waited,
For our certain doom.
To bring us down,
And clean the world,
Of those who were worth this,
And those who weren't.

I am stuck inside my mind,
No one around, I'm left behind.
Left in the dark, being consumed,
Of what is gone, of what is blue.

No one has seen me,
They have looked,
So long I've held on,
So long I've hooked,
A piece of me,
For what I atone,
So what I really am,
Is I'm alone.

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Barbara Barry-Nishanian February 18, 2018 at 8:42 PM Do I sense spiritual undertones? ... If so..when world is cleansed...you will NOT be alone. Ps.37:9-11,29 explains. Beautiful, sensitive deserves honor. bbn Amily Watson February 21, 2018 at 2:33 PM Thank you, Barbara. :)

Marcia Walton February 8, 2018 at 12:46 PM Good work! Amily Watson February 8, 2018 at 4:05 PM Thanks!

Arturo Michael January 30, 2018 at 7:00 PM Up high Jump low...So we came so we go...I like what you're doing...A nice poem of reflection...All the best Amily Amily Watson January 30, 2018 at 7:08 PM Thank you, and I wish you all the best as well. :)

Poet Destroyer A January 29, 2018 at 2:43 PM Hi AMily, this is deep and sad, enjoyed reading your poem. LINDA Amily Watson January 30, 2018 at 6:45 PM Thank you for your comment! Yes, I suppose it is... It's kind of the way I write and think. I believe that the other type of poems I've ever written are love poems. Once again, thank you!