What Am I

Let's all play a guessing game
With some clues but I wont name
The object I am describing
Within the poem I will be hiding
If you listen to these rules
You wont have to be a fool
Take my advice and you will see
This object is figuratively
What everyone really needs
Immersing their brains to feed 
On information that will lead
For helping you to succeed
In figuring out what is hid
A thinking cap upon your lid
Is gonna help you figure out
What my poem is all about
First things first let me explain
You might get driven insane
With each line and hint that's written
I don't want anyone quittin'
Before they have a chance to guess
Take your time and do your best
Use the knowledge in your head
Be patient and never dread
That the answer is not right
Finding inner strength you might
Hear the wheels start to turn
Listen to them and you'll learn
Not to answer too quickly
Read this again and you'll see
What I'm describing might be tough
To figure out--you'll need good luck
It can start with  I or R
Figure it out-- you'll be a star
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Torres Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 7:34 AM
grrr..this is the hardest poem to guess...!!! lol..very awesome write, Davis... have you revealed the answer?.. well, well... CONGRATULATIONS!!!! ^__^
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March 16, 2014 at 5:44 AM
Congratulations on the fine win. Wonderfully penned poem on Who Am I , robin
Hamilton Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 9:13 PM
hi Robin congrats on win hugs
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March 15, 2014 at 2:16 PM
:) Robin , Congratulations, in the "What AM I" contest... love ~SKAT~
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March 15, 2014 at 1:13 PM
Robin, CONGRATULATIONS!! Sending you a big hug, I had so much fun reading every entry. I have a blog "What did you say about me???" Hopefully, you stop by when you have time, and reveal the answer. Tell US here or on my blog. WAHT! WHAT! And WHO YOU ARE? Always and Forever ~LINDA
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