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What Am I

Glowing dimly in the dark, See tiny specks from afar. Blowing around on the breeze, Can bring people to their knees, Destroy people's desires. Because we are the embers of a molten fire, The most deadly part of all. We are the embers.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/23/2013 8:55:00 PM
Carla, , interesting Personifying Science poem.... congrats on the win..... Love Skat <3
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Date: 10/22/2013 10:45:00 PM
Carla, . CONGRATULATIONS... always & forever~ LINDA
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Date: 10/18/2013 5:13:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Carla
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Date: 10/17/2013 10:49:00 PM
I love your take on this poem, turning us all into a questioning fire and your lovely posing of a question. You didn't however choose the personification form that was a contest requirement. It's still a very good poem and enjoyable to read, despite the contest. Thanks very much for entering my contest.
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Date: 10/13/2013 6:44:00 PM
Enjoyed as well.
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Date: 10/8/2013 7:59:00 AM
Stunning ! well done , a wonderful new member you are ! Welcome , you ..with these writes are going far, love Shanity Rain .
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Date: 9/22/2013 2:33:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative work..i am glad that I chose this one today to read..Sara
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Date: 10/8/2013 8:00:00 AM
I agree with you Sara , I am reading through the new here, and finding amazing writings !
Date: 9/22/2013 9:56:00 AM
I was just sat bored at my grandmas when this came to me. I didn't think I just wrote hope u like it.
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