What a Word

H  ades
E ternal
L oveless
L  ife without God  

This has been on my 
mind and heart for
awhile after having 
a nightmare...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Zerbst Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 11:11 AM
You are really good at these acrostics. I have heard that nightmares about hell can be life-changing. Powerful words.
Posey Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 10:46 AM
Sara, dear.... I view these happenings as attacks by the evil one and am gratified that I am enough of a burr under his saddle that he must attack me. It means I must be of some concern to him.... Take comfort and move on..... Love Ya Much..... Jake
Harrell Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 7:01 AM
Yes, it's not a good place! No one wants to go there (I hope). We just have to think. Sorry you had that dream, Sara! Have good ones from now on :)
Maverick Avatar
February 2, 2013 at 8:35 PM
Well it is a poem to make you think Sara.." I don't like the idea of you having a nightmare experience; thoughh here's wishing you better dreams..Joe.."
Horsman Avatar
February 2, 2013 at 5:09 AM
dont want you having nightmares, Sara,, but do make for awesome poetry..
Nutter Avatar
February 1, 2013 at 9:33 PM
Sounds like you had one of my nightmares, excellent write and so profound.
Guzzi Avatar
February 1, 2013 at 5:33 PM
I enjoyed reading your write this evening. Light & Love
Kovrlija Avatar
February 1, 2013 at 2:46 PM
I often have similar dreams. Beautiful poem!
Devnath  Avatar
February 1, 2013 at 9:26 AM
It happens many times. An unforeseen word bears meaning with the help of which we ask with in ourselves to find out in real perspective. Excellent poem enjoyed. Loved always, bl
Dietrich Avatar
February 1, 2013 at 8:42 AM
sara, I fully understand how such a dream affects one's writing. I dreamed something like this before too!!
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