What a Tangled Web I Weaved

in my final minutes of freedom i learned what forgiveness was
i got down on my knees and prayed to God to please give me another chance

the sound of metal clinging locking both of my wrists
shackled on my ankles taking my last breathe of fresh air

i knew it was  over meaning the life i once knew
but was it so bad since that i out grew

i lived my life my way since i was a child
obeying noones orders and living just wild

what a mess that was created in everything i did
leaving a trail of destruction along the way

in my older years i began banging hard
leaving my conscience scarred

the final blow came one night when i was really high
i stole some money from a place that i once had access to

i turned myself in the next morning hoping it would all go away
but the only thing that happened was i was there to stay

my sentence was five to fifteen with no early release
i dropped to my knees and begged God please

"if you help me through this i swear ill change my life"
knowing i had to face my demons and how i lived trife

over time it all worked out and i got released
without having to snitch or sell my soul to the devil

its a hard knock life but im glad i went through it
im here for a reason maybe to save you!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Jordan Avatar
August 30, 2009 at 5:00 AM
Brandy congrats on placing in Chris's contest - God Bless, mj
Mason Avatar
August 26, 2009 at 11:09 AM
But for the luck of the Irish go I ... smile ... how brave of you to share this write with us Brandy and congratulations on your win in Christopher's contest!
Kurth Avatar
August 25, 2009 at 7:14 AM
Great poem on a difficult situation. Like how the narrator comes to a new place in the end. Well deserved placement in Christopher's contest. Krista
Richards Avatar
August 24, 2009 at 12:52 PM
Congratulations on this soul searching...shedding of the skin! ~Carrie
Augustus Avatar
August 24, 2009 at 12:08 PM
Congratulations on your win in Christopher's contest!
Brown Avatar
August 24, 2009 at 8:20 AM
Congratulations on your win in Christopher's contest Brandy. Love, Carol
Higgins Avatar
August 24, 2009 at 7:42 AM
Congrats and thanks for entering.
Townsend Avatar
May 25, 2009 at 5:47 PM
An awesome write. Congratulations on placing in the contest. Smiles from Lolita
Winter Avatar
May 25, 2009 at 1:57 PM
Congrats Brandy on your well deserved win in Michael's contest! Love, Shar
Moreno Avatar
May 24, 2009 at 1:27 PM
Brandy, here is your top ten finish, congrats with your placement in the contest...Raul
Goff Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 1:51 PM
Yes Brandy! I believe that is my mission...to influence others just by being me! by george! I think you've got-it!!! well done! Jim
Nutter Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 7:37 AM
Well written poem and I am glad to hear you have turned your life around. Sometimes we can control our destiny and sometimes we can not. Take care sounds like you are on the right path.
Lachica Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 7:18 AM
Beautiful and lovely poem of yours Brandy! Really, it made me feel your situation through your poem.
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