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7/23/2025 for Tricube Challenge sponsored by Oliver McKeithan

What a Pair

yesterdays
sunshine rays
hearts ablaze

dragonflies
blue-green eyes
happy sighs

times to share
love so rare
what a pair
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Goldsmith Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 10:32 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a blessed day with your win.........
Crandall Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 6:15 PM
Thanks Paula!
Mckeithan Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 12:43 PM
Congrats on your placement in my contest Dave. Wonderful whimsical write.
Crandall Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 6:15 PM
Thanks Oliver!
Crandall Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 6:15 PM
Thanks Oliver!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 23, 2025 at 3:39 PM
nicely flowing comparison...lifted my spirits
Crandall Avatar
July 23, 2025 at 7:05 PM
Thanks Sara, that's good to hear!
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