Jacob Cra Poet Haiku

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*This poem was written when I was seven years old... pretty good for a seven year old, eh?

Beyond the Earth's crust
lies what all desire always.
I'll do what it takes.

Reach doesn't matter.
As I long as I can possess
the key to the box.

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Janet Muthoni April 9, 2013 at 8:35 AM thts great.....4 a seven yrs dude....awesome....:)

Susan Palli January 7, 2013 at 9:17 AM I'm impressed!

Debbie Duncan January 7, 2013 at 3:30 AM Did you ever find out what was in that box ;}

Vesna Kovrlija January 7, 2013 at 2:13 AM Wonderful write for seven years old and for seventy seven...

Bukang Liwayway January 4, 2013 at 7:32 AM genius boy ;) awesome write friend Jacob :) thanks for sharing. Good day!! hugs, Maria

David Williams January 4, 2013 at 6:57 AM Jacob pretty good...David

Carma Sanderson January 3, 2013 at 3:19 PM Nicely done for only being seven, thanks so much, for your enduring comment on my poem play date.... Jacob Cra January 25, 2013 at 7:31 PM Thank you, and I only comment what people deserve. Your poem was OUTSTANDING!

Debbie Guzzi January 3, 2013 at 2:55 PM I'd say you were a brilliant child Thanks so much for stopping by my writes, I so enjoy your visits. Light & Love

Anne-Lise Andresen January 3, 2013 at 11:05 AM Yes it is: pretty good for a seven year old,boy. //oxox Anne-Lise :)