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*This poem was written when I was seven years old... pretty good for a seven year old, eh? Beyond the Earth's crust lies what all desire always. I'll do what it takes. Reach doesn't matter. As I long as I can possess the key to the box.

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Janet Muthoni

Date: 4/9/2013 8:35:00 AM

thts great.....4 a seven yrs dude....awesome....:)

Susan Palli

Date: 1/7/2013 9:17:00 AM

I'm impressed!

Debbie Duncan

Date: 1/7/2013 3:30:00 AM

Did you ever find out what was in that box ;}

Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 1/7/2013 2:13:00 AM

Wonderful write for seven years old and for seventy seven...

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 1/4/2013 7:32:00 AM

genius boy ;) awesome write friend Jacob :) thanks for sharing. Good day!! hugs, Maria

David Williams

Date: 1/4/2013 6:57:00 AM

Jacob pretty good...David

Carma Sanderson

Date: 1/3/2013 3:19:00 PM

Nicely done for only being seven, thanks so much, for your enduring comment on my poem play date....

Jacob Cra
Date: 1/25/2013 7:31:00 PM

Thank you, and I only comment what people deserve. Your poem was OUTSTANDING!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/3/2013 2:55:00 PM

I'd say you were a brilliant child Thanks so much for stopping by my writes, I so enjoy your visits. Light & Love

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/3/2013 11:05:00 AM

Yes it is: pretty good for a seven year old,boy. //oxox Anne-Lise :)