Whaddya Mean

What! A Divorce? Why?!

What do you mean
you want to move on?
Do you want to break up
this marriage of 25 years?
Now! After two teenagers at home?
What do you mean
you need more space?
You live in a mansion
for Pete's sake!
What? You want
to do your things,
Experience life,
Meet new people,
See new places?

Well, who's stopping you?
You have been pretty much
on your own all these years,
And here, I have been slogging
like a donkey 24/7/365,
making more money than 
you can find ways to spend.

I knew not when 
our kids grew up,
I worked hard--
Day in and day out,
So you and kids can live
a life of comfort and luxury,
Now you wanna leave me, gee!
And take half of MY blood and sweat?!
Nah, not even a dime!
No sirree Bob. Nope.
As long as I am alive,
Not a chance. Not a thing.
Zero, Zip, Zilch, Nada!
I'll fight tooth and nail...
Only over my dead body!

(P.S.: Millionaire John Doe was tragically killed
in a single car crash apparently of brakes failure.
He's survived by his wife and two kids.)


~"Poem with a chilling twist" contest by Frank Herrera

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 7/11/2015 8:29:00 PM
A creative write, Abdul! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/7/2015 3:05:00 PM
sweet win
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Date: 7/7/2015 2:11:00 PM
nice win
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Date: 7/7/2015 8:25:00 AM
It seems he was the one who got screwed! Congrats!
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Abdul Malik
Date: 7/7/2015 10:33:00 AM
He was, wasn't he--and how?
Date: 7/7/2015 4:02:00 AM
Wonderful write Abdul! Congrats on ur win!
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Abdul Malik
Date: 7/7/2015 10:32:00 AM
Thanks Upma. Appreciate much.
Date: 6/4/2015 6:41:00 PM
Abdul this is outstanding, and wonderful for the contest 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, dark
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