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Wet Tear

Eyes closed chest implodes Folding inward my head bows Wet tear on my thigh

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/17/2009 8:57:00 PM
The tears and pain drive the almighty pen to create such lovely art. Well done Izzy!
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Date: 5/17/2009 8:31:00 PM
I hope the sun brightens your future days for a bright poet such as yourself. heart felt poem. -Alley
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Date: 5/17/2009 5:28:00 PM
This is a heartwrenching write of sadness and pain. Well done. Again you have put, in just a few words, the emotions of the soul out in the open for the world to see and feel. Great writing. Smiles from Lolita
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