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Wet and Wild

WET AND WILD He almost traversed the globe with buds. She’d whispered a dream in his heart. Now cleansed with torrent sea and suds, this newfound togetherness a start. In this moment wet and wild, hearts pounding like thunder — one a mother wishes for her child, a serendipitous waterfall of wonder. Their love exposed to one another in rushing sheets of cascading splendor. Sliding lips buttery baste each other. Rip roaring rain so close and tender. Marriage serves up cats and dogs — a sensuous flood of bedtime dialogues. 10/25/2018 Tell Me A Story Poetry Contest/Brenda Chiri *When it’s raining cats and dogs, it is raining hard

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Date: 11/1/2018 9:29:00 AM
I enjoyed your sensuous little poem, Kim. The image of "lips basting each other" will linger with me today. Congrats on your win. John
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Date: 10/29/2018 9:15:00 AM
There's some great imagery in this piece; well done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/29/2018 9:34:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 10/25/2018 11:52:00 PM
A terrific rhyming poem that does the contest justice, Kim. Great job as usual!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/26/2018 4:06:00 AM
Thank you, Caren!
Date: 10/25/2018 3:17:00 PM
Such a creative write, Kim! I just loved the phrases --- serendipitous waterfall of wonder … sliding lips buttery baste each other --- they glide so effortlessly over the screen's page. Delightful! ~ gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/25/2018 8:53:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 10/25/2018 2:08:00 PM
Nice piece Kim, great imagery and good rhyme. Have great day,Gordon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/25/2018 8:53:00 PM
Thank you, Gordon!
Date: 10/25/2018 11:41:00 AM
I love your 'Wet and Wild" Kim The buttery lips, a nice touch !!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/25/2018 11:53:00 AM
Thanks, Mike! :)

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