Hello There Poet Rhyme

Were You An Angel

Were you an angel or just my bright star?
To me, you were best, at least better by far…

Your beauty a beacon for lost, weary souls;
your smile an angel’s with heavenly glow;
your laughter a gift of surprise and delight,
His opus composed to erase dark from night.

Is it true you have gone; you have left us from here?
It is true I will miss you each day of the year.




* Written long ago, first posting here ~ thank you for your time :)

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Jennifer Proxenos November 28, 2019 at 7:52 AM I Hope your Angel, reads this wonderful poem, an angelic write , a fav. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Hello There November 28, 2019 at 7:51 PM Thank you so much, Jennifer. Not sure that is possible, my friend :) hugs

Ts Poetry November 21, 2019 at 11:04 AM Certain souls resonate with us and their memories forever forge our heart and mind Hello There November 21, 2019 at 9:16 PM Yes, I do believe this is true :)

Richard Lamoureux November 20, 2019 at 8:34 AM This poem soars high. Sorry for your loss, still this piece causes one’s spirit to rise above the clouds. Hello There November 20, 2019 at 7:24 PM Sweet thing to say, Richard ~ thank you so much <3

Jennifer Proxenos November 20, 2019 at 6:42 AM I believe that our loved ones are angels looking over us - I know my Dad certainly is one, I have smelt his tobacco around sometimes as he used to smoke a pipe. Great write, Hello there, I believe in angels so will surely safe this poem. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Hello There November 20, 2019 at 7:23 PM Wow, thank you, Jennifer :) I'm so glad you feel are able to sense this about your Dad. That is lovely <3 I appreciate your visit here and kind words :)

Silent One November 17, 2019 at 2:30 PM we always miss those we love the most.. and maybe they were an angel.. Hello There November 19, 2019 at 12:30 AM Maybe you're right, Silent One...

Eve Roper November 16, 2019 at 10:15 PM Enjoyed reading, a serene feel to it.. Hello There November 16, 2019 at 11:10 PM Thank you so much, Eve ~ nice to see you :)

Pat Adams November 16, 2019 at 4:56 PM Wow! A sentiment that could have traveled dark, instead showed an elegant grace and upbeat feeling. Very well done my friend! ........... 80) Hello There November 16, 2019 at 9:28 PM Thank you so much, Pat! This person was full of grace, so I'm glad, even in its simplicity, it had that effect :)

Heidi Sands November 16, 2019 at 2:21 PM Beautiful poem and shared memory HT :) Hello There November 16, 2019 at 9:24 PM Thank you, Heidi :)

Regina Mcintosh November 16, 2019 at 3:13 AM This is quite beautiful. I'm faving it. Love it... Blessings, Gina Hello There November 16, 2019 at 9:24 PM Wow, Gina, thank you so very much, my friend <3

Sandra Adams November 15, 2019 at 8:56 PM could have been an angel...i believe their truly are some on this earth,maybe they left because their job was done, or someone needed them more... nice write my friend... hugs :) Hello There November 15, 2019 at 11:10 PM Thank you, Sandy. Just a simple piece for someone who was an angel to me :) hugs

Winged Warrior November 15, 2019 at 9:49 AM Heavenly Angels and earthly angels are so precious...they are always with you, no matter how distant you think they are...superbly executed HT...going into my Angel favs!...love you babe...^WW^ :o) Hello There November 19, 2019 at 12:20 AM Sorry I deleted the video, ^WW^. I'll send the link if you'd like. hugs Hello There November 15, 2019 at 10:00 AM Wow, ^WW^ ~ I'm so happy you liked this one so much, and enough to add as a fav... Thank you so much for the honor and the words you have shared. Much love ^WW^ Winged Warrior November 15, 2019 at 9:50 AM ...love the music video too :o)

Chris Green November 15, 2019 at 7:12 AM A beautiful and heart touching poem expressing the loss of someone close wonderfully. Your poem though feels happy in the sense that the memories of this angel still bring much joy to your world. A wonderful piece of writing my friend. Hello There November 15, 2019 at 9:57 AM This was one who left without a trace. Still hard to believe they're gone. Just wanted to paint a picture of the joy this person brought into my life.

Vijay Pandit November 15, 2019 at 6:09 AM Beauty--smile--laughter--a lovely poem from the heart, angel or star matters not--excellent write, HT. Hello There November 15, 2019 at 9:52 AM Thank you so much, Vijay. I suppose you are right. Just to say it was a very special person...

Na Na November 15, 2019 at 1:34 AM Wonderful Tribute H.T. I hope you cherish this piece from your heart. Words can express so much, the meaning, The worth the feelings. so well expressed. Thanks for sharing this Hello There November 15, 2019 at 9:50 AM Wow, thank you so much, Gregory. I will try to appreciate the pieces I write from my heart more than I have...Thank you for visiting and leaving such kind remarks :)