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Were You An Angel

Were you an angel or just my bright star?
To me, you were best, at least better by far…

Your beauty a beacon for lost, weary souls;
your smile an angel’s with heavenly glow;
your laughter a gift of surprise and delight,
His opus composed to erase dark from night.

Is it true you have gone; you have left us from here?
It is true I will miss you each day of the year.




* Written long ago, first posting here ~ thank you for your time :)

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Jennifer Proxenos Date: 11/28/2019 7:52:00 AM I Hope your Angel, reads this wonderful poem, an angelic write , a fav. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply Hello There Date: 11/28/2019 7:51:00 PM Thank you so much, Jennifer. Not sure that is possible, my friend :) hugs

Ts Poetry Date: 11/21/2019 11:04:00 AM Certain souls resonate with us and their memories forever forge our heart and mind Login to Reply Hello There Date: 11/21/2019 9:16:00 PM Yes, I do believe this is true :)

Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/20/2019 8:34:00 AM This poem soars high. Sorry for your loss, still this piece causes one’s spirit to rise above the clouds. Login to Reply Hello There Date: 11/20/2019 7:24:00 PM Sweet thing to say, Richard ~ thank you so much <3

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 11/20/2019 6:42:00 AM I believe that our loved ones are angels looking over us - I know my Dad certainly is one, I have smelt his tobacco around sometimes as he used to smoke a pipe. Great write, Hello there, I believe in angels so will surely safe this poem. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply Hello There Date: 11/20/2019 7:23:00 PM Wow, thank you, Jennifer :) I'm so glad you feel are able to sense this about your Dad. That is lovely <3 I appreciate your visit here and kind words :)

Silent One Date: 11/17/2019 2:30:00 PM we always miss those we love the most.. and maybe they were an angel.. Login to Reply Hello There Date: 11/19/2019 12:30:00 AM Maybe you're right, Silent One...

Eve Roper Date: 11/16/2019 10:15:00 PM Enjoyed reading, a serene feel to it.. Login to Reply Hello There Date: 11/16/2019 11:10:00 PM Thank you so much, Eve ~ nice to see you :)

Pat Adams Date: 11/16/2019 4:56:00 PM Wow! A sentiment that could have traveled dark, instead showed an elegant grace and upbeat feeling. Very well done my friend! ........... 80) Login to Reply Hello There Date: 11/16/2019 9:28:00 PM Thank you so much, Pat! This person was full of grace, so I'm glad, even in its simplicity, it had that effect :)

Heidi Sands Date: 11/16/2019 2:21:00 PM Beautiful poem and shared memory HT :) Login to Reply Hello There Date: 11/16/2019 9:24:00 PM Thank you, Heidi :)

Regina Mcintosh Date: 11/16/2019 3:13:00 AM This is quite beautiful. I'm faving it. Love it... Blessings, Gina Login to Reply Hello There Date: 11/16/2019 9:24:00 PM Wow, Gina, thank you so very much, my friend <3

Sandra Adams Date: 11/15/2019 8:56:00 PM could have been an angel...i believe their truly are some on this earth,maybe they left because their job was done, or someone needed them more... nice write my friend... hugs :) Login to Reply Hello There Date: 11/15/2019 11:10:00 PM Thank you, Sandy. Just a simple piece for someone who was an angel to me :) hugs

Winged Warrior Date: 11/15/2019 9:49:00 AM Heavenly Angels and earthly angels are so precious...they are always with you, no matter how distant you think they are...superbly executed HT...going into my Angel favs!...love you babe...^WW^ :o) Login to Reply Hello There Date: 11/19/2019 12:20:00 AM Sorry I deleted the video, ^WW^. I'll send the link if you'd like. hugs Hello There Date: 11/15/2019 10:00:00 AM Wow, ^WW^ ~ I'm so happy you liked this one so much, and enough to add as a fav... Thank you so much for the honor and the words you have shared. Much love ^WW^ Winged Warrior Date: 11/15/2019 9:50:00 AM ...love the music video too :o)

Chris Green Date: 11/15/2019 7:12:00 AM A beautiful and heart touching poem expressing the loss of someone close wonderfully. Your poem though feels happy in the sense that the memories of this angel still bring much joy to your world. A wonderful piece of writing my friend. Login to Reply Hello There Date: 11/15/2019 9:57:00 AM This was one who left without a trace. Still hard to believe they're gone. Just wanted to paint a picture of the joy this person brought into my life.

Vijay Pandit Date: 11/15/2019 6:09:00 AM Beauty--smile--laughter--a lovely poem from the heart, angel or star matters not--excellent write, HT. Login to Reply Hello There Date: 11/15/2019 9:52:00 AM Thank you so much, Vijay. I suppose you are right. Just to say it was a very special person...

Na Na Date: 11/15/2019 1:34:00 AM Wonderful Tribute H.T. I hope you cherish this piece from your heart. Words can express so much, the meaning, The worth the feelings. so well expressed. Thanks for sharing this Login to Reply Hello There Date: 11/15/2019 9:50:00 AM Wow, thank you so much, Gregory. I will try to appreciate the pieces I write from my heart more than I have...Thank you for visiting and leaving such kind remarks :)