Were It Like This All the Time

four deer among the leaves
laying still in rest and peace
safe for the moment
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Lopez Avatar
December 8, 2009 at 7:13 PM
nice work in this nature piece..... and welcome to the soup!
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December 8, 2009 at 2:27 PM
Mr XXXXX XXXXX -I dont think i welcomed you to our soup site,you're gonna enjoy it here,I can picture this heavenly scenery,four deers in the forest amongst the leaves,I can picture a Robin singing sweet melodies too,This picture is so vivid,It makes me live the moment,that never ending moment of sweet dreams-Excellent work indeed, inspired me to write a haiku..tnks..ChaRma
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