Were Going To the Florida Keys

Were going to the Florida Keys! Were going to Florida Keys!
As I mentioned we were on our way to the Florida Keys... 
it was my mother, father, my sisters and me the brother of the family, 
driving down the road for what seemed to be an eternity, 
we always stopped at different places between the two this time especially, 
the reason being, the mother of the family is now to be excepting. 
So she's extra hungry! Eating for two and craving the craziest of foods,
she pretty much had the whole East coast to choose.
My dad driving, my sister Debby and I going back and forth, 
if were not for the sake of that game boy!
Now we have reach our destination, 
were on Cudjoe Key! It is about 80 degree  
and first I run straight to the edge of the of peer, were it looks
out and over the clearest water anywhere near Dela-Where? 
The peer looks out and over the Gulf Of Mexico just amazed, excited 
and anticipating exactly what ever it is that they have plained to do next,
The next day we were out to sea, all on board the The HammerHead outboard!
My Pop-pop being just as excited as me, to show us all the secret fishing spots!
my dad and I at the captains orders.
With fishing lines casted in crept the board-em, 
then the noise of the reel on the pole humming the tune of something, finally something!
as my pop-pop flung back on the pole "hooking" the fish, he calls for me to take control 
reeling and getting tired quick, we all soon realized it wasn't just a fish for us to consume
it was actually a Hammer Head shark!
it wasn't any bigger then about 3 foot long it was still very strong, and still as dangerous
as it looked,
Not second guessing the situation, the adults took control with all their 
experience cutting the fishing line, but not before we got to take a good 
long look and a couple pictures of this...
this shark the particular one that my pop-pop named his boat after, 
now with a story to last a lifetime and a few kodak memory's of this specific time
only to hope as I'm watching the sun set that me and my family will soon have a story 
just like this one to rewind.

Robert c Bessel jr.
2/23/2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/28/2016 9:26:00 PM
Robert Bessel, nice to see this one again. LINDA
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Date: 8/10/2015 10:58:00 PM
ROBERT, a wonderful read.... LOVE *SKAT*
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Date: 4/30/2014 5:51:00 AM
Very brilliant and enjoyable write on fishing. Congrats on the win, Robert
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Date: 4/29/2014 5:16:00 PM
Hi Robert, It is' an honor to be the first to remark on your winning poem. I love Hammer Head Sharks. I think this was a fun adventure. Thank you for sharing. As awesome as they arrive. Congratulations, in Caleb's "Gone Fishin'" contest.. Take care and have a skillful day *** always~ LINDA
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