Well, Loved

Like old paint,
the discarded heart chips away
where it lay
in a hollow chest
not unlike my own breast.

In its prime,
untainted by sin
and made of sheepskin,
its candy apple hue
captivated everyone—especially the likes of you.

However, who now
could admire a color
so mottled by misuse and so drastically duller?
Verily, no unclouded eye could find merit
in such a sorry trinket.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 2:03 PM
A very unique little poem. Congrats on the win
Ashley Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 8:56 AM
Dear Viviana, I adore this captivating and poignant poem! Such vibrant imagery and vivid metaphors. I loved "candy apple hue" and " sorry trinket"- you capture the essence of one's heart before and after the heartbreak that love can bring. Congratulations for your success in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Toney Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 3:41 PM
Vaviana, congratulations on your top 10 win on Mile 2 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. A very thought-provoking poem with excellent word choice. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 3 has already started.
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