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Well, Loved

Like old paint, the discarded heart chips away where it lay in a hollow chest not unlike my own breast. In its prime, untainted by sin and made of sheepskin, its candy apple hue captivated everyone—especially the likes of you. However, who now could admire a color so mottled by misuse and so drastically duller? Verily, no unclouded eye could find merit in such a sorry trinket.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 8/4/2025 3:41:00 PM
Vaviana, congratulations on your top 10 win on Mile 2 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. A very thought-provoking poem with excellent word choice. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 3 has already started.
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