Well Halleluyah

Well what a way to start the day Halleluyah and happy thoughts and all Absolutely nothing can match it Your smile is a mile wide it's a scandal Hope it lasts the whole day long Wouldn't that be a damn kick in the head Careful though for serious injury May end up strapped to a hospital bed Imagine if Leonard Cohen wrote About murder, robbery, mistreating beagles Summing up his thoughts He was speaking of disappointing people
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November 4, 2022 at 8:39 PM
A nice start to the day Jack, and it is to be said..... that smiling all day should not put you in a Loony bed !... Glad Lenny wrote Halleluyah instead of his mind being in a fog ....... and writing about cruelty to a lil dog !!! lol You sure write humorous rhymes.... Liked this one. Its cute.
Ellison Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 4:29 AM
My brain comes up with sad stuff but refuses to keep it serious... a brain malfunction? LOL
Blown Avatar
November 3, 2022 at 10:07 AM
...sounds a nice day....as be your goodt morn ink....cohen and nana moskouri be two of my long time favorite singers....... stan
Ellison Avatar
November 4, 2022 at 5:50 AM
Sadly I must turn down your invitation for a Tim Horton's get together! I am no longer "mobile"... no longer drive no licence! Really would like to meet it would be great!!! At 87, very limited in my mobility, use a "walker" get around! I am really sorry to have to decline Stan... it would have been great to meet face to face! Cheers Jack
Blown Avatar
November 3, 2022 at 4:31 PM
...i've an appointment in toronto in early december....might be a chance for a tim hortons coffee?.....email reply might be best........stan
Ellison Avatar
November 3, 2022 at 4:27 PM
"M"oskouri
Ellison Avatar
November 3, 2022 at 12:35 PM
WOW Nana Goskouri and Leonard Cohen... oh yeah!!!! Me too... memories! Cheers Stan!
Cunningham Avatar
November 3, 2022 at 4:24 AM
Best way to start the day Jack, careful your jaw doesn't lock lol. Tom
Ellison Avatar
November 3, 2022 at 1:54 PM
Ah yes THE BEATLES and STONES LOL
Cunningham Avatar
November 3, 2022 at 10:47 AM
You might have heard of the beatles and the rolling stones. Lol
Ellison Avatar
November 3, 2022 at 4:48 AM
Are you aware Leonard Cohen is a Canadian? Wow we have some famous people here... are there any in Great Britain?
Bangalee Avatar
November 3, 2022 at 2:19 AM
first stanza makes me thinker about your whole writings; written well
Ellison Avatar
November 3, 2022 at 2:50 AM
Thank you my friend!!!
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