Welcoming a Goodbye-- One Liner

Bloom of morn's welcome unfurls when pained goodbye acts as a teacher.



Silent One's One Liner--Hello and Goodbye
12/21/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Andresen Avatar
December 24, 2018 at 5:01 AM
- Congratulations, Nette :) - Merry Christmas ... enjoy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
December 23, 2018 at 12:13 PM
Congrats on your win Nette..Merry Christmas!
Callus Avatar
December 23, 2018 at 9:04 AM
We learn from experience, Nette. ~ Congratulations on a most deserved top win! Hugs // paul
Dietrich Avatar
December 23, 2018 at 8:58 AM
Beautiful as ever, Nette. What is going on. I rarely hear from you!!
Sands Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 1:34 PM
Congratulations for your great win. Merry Christmas :)
Devonshire Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 11:01 AM
This is excellent, Nette. Definitely one of the best entries I've seen. Congratulations on your great win in the one-liner contest! Best wishes for the holidays, Carolyn
Y. Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 10:19 AM
Hi Nette, Great one-liner. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis
One Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 9:21 AM
What a teacher it is aswell.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Makama Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 9:20 AM
Powerful and wonderful for a one liner poem.. Wishing you the best in the contest. Merry christmas and a happy new year.
Salehi Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 8:37 PM
This is a great one-liner. It is a book by itself.
Paras Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 4:59 PM
Positive way to perceive goodbye. Magnificant line steeped in dignified words!
Green Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 2:42 PM
This was really nice Nette. Few words, big message. Really nicely done.
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