Welcome To My World

AS NIGHT FALLS THESE FOUR WALLS ENCLOSE MY SOUL,LIGHTS FADE LOW,WOMAN SCREAM 
AND MOAN.
LOVERS GET EXCITED,INMATES START TO RIOT,GUARDS ALL AROUND,BLANKETS BECOMING 
TOMBS.
SOAP USED AS WEAPONS,SOCKS COVERING FINGERPRINTS,GAME PLANS GETTING DECIDED,
CURSING ALL AROUND.
DESTRUCTION UNDERWAY!
D.E.A. PLANTING EVIDENCE,PARENTS UNDER RAP.
FEDERAL ATTORNEYS UNDERPAID,BEST FRIENDS BUILT ON COMMISSARY LISTS.
SAYING "I LOVE YOU"IN THE SHOWER,FIGHTING IN AN HOUR.
GRANDMOTHERS DOING BIDS,CRACK SOLD BY KIDS.
CONTROLLING US THROUGH A TOWER.
WHO REALLY HAS THE POWER?
NOTHING FROM YESTURDAY COUNTS TOWARDS TOMORROW.
WHAT WE DO TODAY WILL EFFECT OUR FUTURE.
TAKE MY ADVICE,ITS FREE.
YOU DONT HAVE TO LIVE LIKE ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Goff Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 5:51 PM
Brandy, barely contained emotions, cool effect!!!! Jim
Thomer Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 5:25 PM
i really like this one! the ending made it even better! sounds like the kinda world i could get into haha. very well done --maddie
Frazier Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 7:13 PM
yes brandy, we all have choices and sometimes we make the wrong ones. that's to be expected. the true tragedy is when we don't learn from those mistakes and allow ourselves to grow and strive to head into a better direction instead. it hurt to read these words. i feel the intense pain of a major mistake. hold on and stay uplifted. God is near. thank you for your lovely comment. WELCOME. blessings............RAIN
Orozco Avatar
April 28, 2009 at 5:49 PM
Nicely written! -darkpoet
Ehigiator Avatar
April 28, 2009 at 5:11 PM
Wow, very disturbing read..Sometimes it is the choices that one makes that decides their future. I hope that things will get better for you and the rest of us. Keep sharing your poetry and Welcome to poetrysoup and God Bless Always, Tyesha
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
April 28, 2009 at 4:09 PM
Brandi, this was disturbing to read. You gave some good advise, but sometimes people just have to learn for themselves first hand. I'm sorry that times are rough for you. Hope for a better future....Keep Writing. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Lovingly, Dane
Guzzi Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 5:08 PM
wow not much hope there. I'll think you some good thoughts! Light & Love
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