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Weigh the Risks

I never planned on saying goodbye
If I had it my way we'd both have wings to fly
I never planned on making you cry
But not letting go would be living a lie

Neither of us know, nor could we tell
If falling in love would turn out that well
But what could I do, I watched as you fell
Wishing for the simple saving grace of a bell

You said, "weigh the risks" and that's what I did
Risks are better not taken, smiles better off hid
It saves so much pain to keep a closed lid
And it can't be opened with a bribe, the highest bid

So I hope that your hurt doesn't last very long
I hope your heartbreak isn't lived in every song
I never planned on this being so wrong
But it would be a lie to just play along.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/7/2014 6:17:00 PM
This is a country song in the making, all the emotionaly plucked heartstring beautifuly played.
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Date: 4/22/2014 12:54:00 PM
Juli- Michelle, this was artistically done.
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Date: 4/21/2014 3:01:00 PM
this charms me no end; the wisdom of your thoughts soars high, juli.. thanks for making me part of your battle rhyme contest!.. huggs
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Date: 4/20/2014 5:01:00 AM
Very appealing and touchy write, julie
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Date: 4/19/2014 2:43:00 PM
lol.. i just remembered my last heartbreak.. when i need really to take one decision and weigh all the risks involved...... you strike me right through... touchy write, olive.. :)
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