Weepy Day

Dark clouds conceal sun
Hiding shine that sparks the light
To a weepy face













For Senryu Sadness Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Laura Loo
Third Place
August 31, 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Barry-Nishanian Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 9:13 AM
congrats.
Negron Flores Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 6:43 PM
Thank you Bárbara.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 10:52 PM
Congratulations, Nayda on your win.
Negron Flores Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 11:07 PM
Thank you Subimal.
Sands Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 12:09 PM
Congratulations Nayda :)
Negron Flores Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 1:15 PM
Thank you Heidi.
Andresen Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 11:47 AM
- Congratulations on your great third place in the contest, Nayda - Well done - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Negron Flores Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 1:13 PM
Thank you Anne Lise.
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