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Weeping Words

On a bard’s nib we slept, Hibernated, slumbered and under the quinine stains we wept. Yearned we did to spill ourselves on paper, Bard he caged his thoughts and emotions for later. Later, we heard them thoughts say and an year went by, Afraid we were for the burden on his heart was high. Ever we knew that a lip curved in pain, Can be kissed into a smile again. Our neighbor,more sorrowing words,them lay folded, Some on the table & most weeping in his heart , pounding his head all loaded. A cry afar a sob we at times faintly hear, A smile , an eruption we sense at times from his dear. A fortnight back the darkness did go, And lights flowed dim at first and then bright but slow. flickered & danced from them thoughts, some lingered lighting up, on till all emotions to the fore he brought. The breeze is blowing nice and strong, We hope to be on a page that all would throng. The languid wings of air still carry the scent, Of his sweetheart long after she went………………………

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/5/2012 12:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your super win Sashi. Love, Carol
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 3/6/2012 8:00:00 AM
thanks Carol.........~sashi
Date: 3/4/2012 10:38:00 PM
Congratulations on a win in my contest! I enjoyed this very much, and it really took me somewhere nice and rustic. You might have a few grammar issues, but overall a splendid poem!  -KMD
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 3/6/2012 8:02:00 AM
thanks for the feed back... this one was written by me in1983 as an 18 year old..(you will see a lot of pink floyd in it.).....and drafted again october 2011 end or early nov.....~sashi
Date: 1/17/2012 7:36:00 AM
like to take in the first posted poem for soup, i'm not disappointed this is so good. harry
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 1/18/2012 7:04:00 AM
thank you HARRY.
Date: 12/19/2011 8:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Sashi. I hope to see you as a premium member in the new year. Love, Carol
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 12/19/2011 8:29:00 AM
thank you for kind words....i am humbled....namaste.
Date: 11/1/2011 4:58:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Sashi. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 11/3/2011 11:22:00 AM
Thanks for the warm comments Carol.

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