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Weeping Willow

The tall Weeping willow Waves majestically Somehow she seems to be haunted Moaning Maybe She’s merely airing her branches In the windy meadow Being heard by Spirits Written by Brenda Meier-Hans Fall 2012 This is know as a Mirror Cinquain 5 Lines + 5 Lines Syllables 1-2 2-4 3-6 4-8 5-2 6-2 7-8 8-6 9-4 10-2

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Date: 9/22/2014 11:46:00 PM
I was delighted, Brenda, to read a poem about one of my favorite trees. :)
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Date: 9/18/2014 7:50:00 PM
Thank you so much Mary Jo
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Date: 9/17/2014 10:17:00 PM
Well written Brenda! Best to you! Xxxx D.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/18/2014 7:49:00 PM
Thanks Dorian
Date: 9/17/2014 9:07:00 PM
so enchanting Brenda a mystical sense to this lovely pen ty for visiting my page hugs
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/17/2014 9:39:00 PM
Happy you liked it shadow.
Date: 9/17/2014 3:42:00 PM
I'm not sure how the form works, but this is a nice picture of a willow tree, dear! I need to read up on Cinquains again!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/17/2014 3:54:00 PM
It's actually not a formed poetry. This one is mirror cinquain. I'll explain it above. I just find they look food like this.
Date: 9/17/2014 2:09:00 PM
Oh I love willow trees Brenda - this is a lovely write:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/17/2014 2:24:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I do too and am always mystified by their beauty.

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