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Weeping Willow

I won't climb the branches of self pity I won't swing from the weeds trying to find my kitty I won't cling to the trunk with tears in my eyes I won't hide under the roots telling myself lies I am not completely sunk I don't want to chop down the noble timber But I need the lumber to build My boat So I can sail away And find my fortune My future Instead of swaying in the wind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/28/2008 3:48:00 PM
A different write. Interesting. Thanks for the input on my poem Autumn's Arrival, albeit not "perfect".
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Date: 10/16/2008 4:47:00 PM
this write has hope and faith, keep on trying, take care D-nyce
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Date: 10/15/2008 9:25:00 AM
When your ready you will do it. Your future. This is very creative. Autumn you have great ideas as usual. Blessings Michael
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