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Weeping Widow

She waits by the river Watching her withering shadow Mourning pearls low Dusting the ashes slowly Deep within so lonely Slaughtered body of her mate send shiver. She quietly screams through her white veil Stained in widowed red Weeping willows dread She prayed for grace River took her in loving embrace Her loud screams, echoes trails. Passerby abhor Some say we warned Many scorned She painted her nude body with his ash Ran along the banks in a dash Her white veil waived a roar. Date-August 31,2014

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/5/2015 10:36:00 PM

ZOE, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Have yourself a Happy Easter Love LINDA

Mark Trichet

Date: 9/23/2014 6:11:00 PM

Back with Big Congratulations Zoe! Well done

Zoe Life
Date: 9/30/2014 10:48:00 PM

Ye Mark... Thank you :) Am so happy to know that this one made it on the list.. :)

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/23/2014 8:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your win for this well written sad poem.

Zoe Life
Date: 9/30/2014 10:47:00 PM

Thank you Brenda :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/23/2014 6:17:00 AM

I feel sad about the weeping widow, congrats on the win, Zoe

Zoe Life
Date: 9/30/2014 10:46:00 PM

Thank you Dr. Ram for reading the poem.. Appreciate your visit.

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 9/22/2014 9:48:00 PM

Zoe, what a familiarity. Superlatively written to the theme. However, it is super-awesome to know our minds can channels the same but our ideology is quite different in meaning. Congratulations on this well written piece and your high marks in the contest. Verlena

Zoe Life
Date: 9/30/2014 10:45:00 PM

Thank you Verlena for the visit. I was surprised to see our similar sounding poem titles.... It's different too.. I like your better.. Thank you for your wishes

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/22/2014 9:27:00 PM

Zoe, Congratulations, :) enjoy your win, and stop by my latest blog "We Will Never Know" if you have time, or if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Zoe Life
Date: 9/30/2014 10:43:00 PM

Thank you Linda for the great news.

Mark Trichet

Date: 9/12/2014 2:42:00 AM

Wow, such a bewitching write! I loved the intense imagery, so sad and stark. Well done Zoe, its nice to meet you and your stories. Thanks for your visit earlier

Zoe Life
Date: 9/12/2014 2:53:00 AM

Most welcome.. Do visit often...am glad to be acquainted with you.. Thank you for your amazing feedback.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/11/2014 11:54:00 PM

really nice work. an enjoyable read. thank you.

Zoe Life
Date: 9/12/2014 2:55:00 AM

Glad to know you like it...Thank you

M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/1/2014 11:39:00 AM

Very well done! I feel for her, though.

Zoe Life
Date: 9/1/2014 9:39:00 PM

Thank you Kiser for the visit and for your comments. I appreciate you taking time out to read my ink.

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/31/2014 1:18:00 PM

A great write!!... "Passerby abhor Some say we warned Many scorned She painted her nude body with his ash Ran along the banks in a dash Her white veil waived a roar."

Zoe Life
Date: 9/1/2014 9:37:00 PM

Thank you Robert for the visit and for your appreciation.