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Weeping Moon

As I look up at the starless sky
I see the weeping moon shine bright
Secretly wishing I could fly
Across the skies to were my heart truly lies
I miss my father, who’s far away leading another life with 
Another wife
They have daughter beautiful as can be
I secretly wish that she was me
I never knew my father until I was grown
Now we are the best of friends
But my heart still longs for forgotten memories
That were never shared between 
A father and his oldest daughter

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Belinda Parish Date: 2/7/2009 9:43:00 PM Truly beautiful write Sarah Login to Reply

John Loving Iii Date: 9/5/2008 7:12:00 AM unlike you i had a father. not all the memories are good ones, but it ballances it self out. and not many people can say their best friends with a man who wasn't there. but you did well in the forgiving and mending and finding in what love could be. forgetting the past......jhl Login to Reply

Laura Mckenzie Date: 8/29/2008 11:06:00 AM Sarah So wonderfully expressed I am sorry for the pain you feel but now you have a great friendship with your father. He must be so proud of you! Keep writing and sharing with us! Peace Laura :) Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 8/23/2008 5:29:00 PM another great and warm and tender poem, loved it. Login to Reply

Michael Jordan Date: 8/23/2008 7:35:00 AM I read the next poem first so I'm really emotional right now honey. I will carry the regret of the years we lost to my grave Sarah. That is a pain that will never die. I'm sorry for what i was honey. I love you, Dad Login to Reply

Katherine Stella Date: 8/23/2008 5:35:00 AM Touching write Sarah but to think you have him now full time and he shall never walk away again I hear you gave him a beautiful grandchild no better time to recapture time together this was really good look forward to reviewing more of your writes so nice to meet you bless you and family Login to Reply

Sharon Winter Date: 8/23/2008 4:57:00 AM I imagine this brought many regretful tears to your dad's eyes. I suppose we must count the blessings we have, as I am sure you do. You are a talented poetess, and it is wonderful to have you here. Love, Shar Login to Reply

Brittany Martin Date: 8/22/2008 8:02:00 PM This made me a little teary. My grandfather did the same thing to his family.. My mother and her sisters were neglected, and still are for the most part. I'm sorry to hear this, at least the two of you have reunited to create some memories.. right? Emotional piece. -brittany Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 8/22/2008 6:52:00 PM I feel for you. It is a sad fact of life, that we make mistakes, and wish we could retify the people we've hurt or left behind. We can't turn back time, but hopefully can make the best of the future. God Bless.....Carrie Login to Reply

Christy Hardy Date: 8/22/2008 6:31:00 PM This is sad, but true for so many daughters. As a man gets older, he then realizes his importance in being a part of every year of his childrens life. You are blessed to have the chance to know him. You now have a sister, I know you love her. Always, Christy Login to Reply