Weeping Flower

She weeps as her growth
 partner has been cut away.
  He is now in vase!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 5, 2010 at 8:27 PM
Dear Gareth, YOU made me weep as my partner was also taken away many Years ago Superb Write an amazing Haiku YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG -- SOUP MAIL CALL
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April 18, 2010 at 11:47 AM
Very sad but nice Haiku...enjoyed...Marty
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April 18, 2010 at 2:33 AM
Awww! The poor couple! Enjoyed this perspective of the crying flower.
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