Weep Away On Me

Storm, cry down on me
Weep away sorrows on me
Streak my face with tears
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Mckenzie Avatar
May 23, 2009 at 5:59 PM
Wonderful what a different uniqueness you have in this Haiku! Laura :)
Devonshire Avatar
May 10, 2009 at 12:30 PM
Beautiful poem, Jen! Sometimes those raindrops can help hide our own tears. Like the image of a crying sky. Love, Carolyn
Moreno Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 12:50 PM
Lovely image of the storm crying on you...Raul
Giroux Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 12:49 PM
Nice job
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