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Weep Away On Me

Storm, cry down on me Weep away sorrows on me Streak my face with tears

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/23/2009 5:59:00 PM
Wonderful what a different uniqueness you have in this Haiku! Laura :)
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Date: 5/10/2009 12:30:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Jen! Sometimes those raindrops can help hide our own tears. Like the image of a crying sky. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/7/2009 12:50:00 PM
Lovely image of the storm crying on you...Raul
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Date: 5/7/2009 12:49:00 PM
Nice job
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