Weeds of Regret

Forever lost deep in a lonely heart,
stands a forgotten palace hidden from sight.
Where lived a simple scribe who practiced his art
and languished in the flames of candle light.

While a fair princess peacefully slept,
upon her pillow by a warm crackling fire.
She was surrounded by the lovely roses she kept,
pressed between the written words of a secret admirer.

She would often sit in the evening air,
overlooking the garden from above.
Into the eyes of the moon she would stare,
dreaming of the face of an unknown love.

The young scribe dared not reveal himself,
being a plain looking man with meager means.
Having to leave his heart upon a shelf,
only to hold her in his arms in a dream.

Then one bitter night a cold wind blew
and took the fair princess away.
When her letters were found they all sadly knew,
the young maiden died with a broken heart that day.

The young scribe never wrote another word,
he tended her garden the rest of his days.
His face never seen, his voice never heard,
a life lived in a dream never to stray.

Time has moved on, but the moon still remains.
Looking from his lofty throne he will never forget.
This crumbling castle with its garden of pain,
neglected and choked by the weeds of regret.






 8/26/19

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 8/23/2022 8:54:00 PM
Gorgeous! A fave for me and congratulations! ps
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Date: 7/4/2022 5:13:00 AM
Great writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/4/2022 3:34:00 AM
Oh, my goodness, Wren. You have written such a beautifully worded romantic tragedy. I had goosebumps near the end, and that doesn't happen often. I admire your talent. Congratulations for your winning entry.
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Date: 7/3/2022 1:18:00 PM
Dear Wren, I was captivated by the sad beauty of your exquisite poem. Amazing imagery and emotion is displayed with the heartfelt talent of your melancholy pen. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
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Wren Rushing
Date: 7/3/2022 1:54:00 PM
Thank you Susan! You never seem to disappoint in lifting my spirits with your wonderful comments! Have a blessed day!
Date: 7/3/2022 11:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this awesome writing, Wren. I can see that nature combined with melancholy is a winning combination!
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Wren Rushing
Date: 7/3/2022 1:56:00 PM
Thank you Andrea and good luck in the marathon!
Date: 7/3/2022 8:41:00 AM
So tragic, overtones of loneliness fill the lines of this piece. Well done Wren and congrats on its placement.
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Wren Rushing
Date: 7/3/2022 2:03:00 PM
Thank you Mark for your comments! Have a blessed day my friend!
Date: 7/2/2022 2:51:00 PM
Nicely done, Wren! The last two lines say it all. You are an ace storyteller. Congratulations on your win on Mile 5 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Mile 6 has already started, and guess what? You're currently tied for 8th position overall! You can find the current standings in my blog post.
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Wren Rushing
Date: 7/3/2022 1:55:00 PM
Thank you Mark for the placement in your contest and for the kind comments!
Date: 8/26/2019 3:46:00 AM
You write it nice...I like it...
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Wren Rushing
Date: 8/26/2019 10:53:00 AM
Thank you Artuo! Your kind words are appreciated!
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