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Weeds Amongst Golden Wheat

All lies may flourish and thrive like a fragrant flower
But like weeds amongst golden wheat, they have a defining hour
~*~

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Clay Robbins

Date: 12/25/2011 11:14:00 PM

Amazing... so simple yet profound... and I like the rhyme aspect too! p.s. I think I replied on more than one ocassion spelling your beautiful name as two words. I hope you will forgive my blunder... and thank you Annelise for your beautiful sentiments, those lovely inspirational words in your poetry and thoughtful encouraging comments given to your extended family here at 'the p-soup' that comes from your noble and most authentic heartfelt self.

Audrey Haick
Date: 12/26/2011 11:32:00 AM

Good Morning Clay..Your comments encourage me..yes they do. Thank you! However, some explanation is necessary so check your soupmail, if you will. Love, Annalise

Dinda Minardi

Date: 10/9/2011 9:01:00 AM

You write something non poetical and wrapped it to a pretty poetical piece. I enjoyed this :)

Don Johnson

Date: 10/8/2011 11:24:00 PM

wilting sees its then they die chemicals do make em cry, our dishonor why, weed with a complex...

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/7/2011 4:16:00 PM

GReat wisdom in the piece!! Enjoyed reading your work and Thanks for reading my church by the sea....

Jack Horne

Date: 10/7/2011 9:30:00 AM

Yes, indeed - witty piece, my friend

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/27/2011 6:20:00 AM

still marvelous to me, anna..:) huggs! nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2011 12:53:00 AM

How NICE!!

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/26/2011 10:52:00 PM

Well said, Annalise. Kim

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/26/2011 3:26:00 PM

a magnificent write to ignite thought provoking action Annalise.. perfect title to compliment the message.. good luck if for the contest my friend..truly stunning..luv..

Weeds Amongst Golden Wheat

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