Weeds Amongst Golden Wheat

All lies may flourish and thrive like a fragrant flower
But like weeds amongst golden wheat, they have a defining hour
~*~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Robbins Avatar
December 25, 2011 at 11:14 PM
Amazing... so simple yet profound... and I like the rhyme aspect too! p.s. I think I replied on more than one ocassion spelling your beautiful name as two words. I hope you will forgive my blunder... and thank you Annelise for your beautiful sentiments, those lovely inspirational words in your poetry and thoughtful encouraging comments given to your extended family here at 'the p-soup' that comes from your noble and most authentic heartfelt self.
Haick Avatar
December 26, 2011 at 11:32 AM
Good Morning Clay..Your comments encourage me..yes they do. Thank you! However, some explanation is necessary so check your soupmail, if you will. Love, Annalise
Minardi Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 9:01 AM
You write something non poetical and wrapped it to a pretty poetical piece. I enjoyed this :)
Johnson Avatar
October 8, 2011 at 11:24 PM
wilting sees its then they die chemicals do make em cry, our dishonor why, weed with a complex...
Culverhouse Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 4:16 PM
GReat wisdom in the piece!! Enjoyed reading your work and Thanks for reading my church by the sea....
Horne Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 9:30 AM
Yes, indeed - witty piece, my friend
Onclaud Avatar
September 27, 2011 at 6:20 AM
still marvelous to me, anna..:) huggs! nette
Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2011 at 12:53 AM
How NICE!!
Merryman Avatar
September 26, 2011 at 10:52 PM
Well said, Annalise. Kim
Sweetheart Avatar
September 26, 2011 at 3:26 PM
a magnificent write to ignite thought provoking action Annalise.. perfect title to compliment the message.. good luck if for the contest my friend..truly stunning..luv..
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