Weeds

(triple haiku)

Pull! Pull! Keep it up!
I hope you dispose of it
Crunch! Crunch! Toss it out!

Grab - you can do it!
Pull - I wish you could be bold!
Throw it out of siiight!!

Pull! Pull! Those vile weeds
I need you to let go now!
You're on a good start...
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Allison Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 12:23 AM
Lovely imagery David - they say a weed is just a plant growing in the wrong place - shame they seem to choose my garden! Hugs Jan
Mehta Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 10:19 AM
Lovely expressions with imagery, david
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