Weeds

Weeds


I looked upon my garden fair,
At lovely flowers growing there.
And to one side where I planted seed,
I saw a tiny little weed.

But in the hurry of the morn,
I didn't pull that weed I scorned.
But hurried onto other chores,
And with those completed, went indoors.

Just a day or two from then,
I viewed my garden once again.
But now that lovely little space,
Was full of weeds, just a disgrace.

I couldn't quite believe twas true,
That where one weed was, many grew.
And crowded out my blossoms bright,
It seems had happened over night.

But quickly now I pulled them out,
And prayed my flowers would grow stout.
I vowed I'd keep weeds from that spot,
And beautify that garden plot.

Then I remembered that within,
My life, I must be free from sin.
For as the weeds would choke the rose,
Sin left unchecked, speedily grows.

If a beautiful flowers I want to be,
In God's garden eternally.
Then I must let no sin live here,
But keep my life's soil clean and dear.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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August 3, 2011 at 2:24 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Jeff. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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May 19, 2011 at 6:16 PM
I think that you have literally paved the road paved with addiction straight to double H H Hockey sticks,
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May 16, 2011 at 5:26 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Jedff
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May 16, 2011 at 12:44 PM
Congratulations on your featured write this week jeff. Love, Carol
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May 15, 2011 at 5:53 PM
Congrats Jeff on your featured poem this week on P.S. .. a great one to share with us all with luv..
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May 7, 2011 at 8:30 PM
Jeff,, Congratulations on your featured poem this week... Wishing you a wonderful mothers day.. :-) p.d.
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May 2, 2011 at 9:06 AM
Nice write. I love how you compared the weeds to sin. Congrats on your feature this week.
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May 2, 2011 at 4:41 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jeff. Love, Carol
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May 1, 2011 at 1:50 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Jeff
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