Wedge of Hope

Yet whilst ajar, my hopes are wafer thin,

as door is slight, then wide awake am I

constraint of dismal days without reply

hopeful that if somehow, light shines in.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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November 21, 2008 at 2:18 PM
Marvelous abba rhyming and flow... great title, great piece! Best wishes, Keith
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