Wedding Senryu

standing at the altar
                              wearing a tuxedo
                              to his funeral
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dietrich Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 2:49 PM
It has two interpretations. Both are sad!!
Knowlton Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 3:04 PM
Yes, but does`t that make for a good senryu?…Thank you again for reading and commenting.
Michael Avatar
May 25, 2019 at 5:48 AM
Good one...there are quite a few zombies out there...
Knowlton Avatar
May 25, 2019 at 6:22 AM
Hi Arturo, and thank you. Hope you`re well. Thanks for the response.
Fruth Avatar
May 25, 2019 at 12:18 AM
Funny write!
Knowlton Avatar
May 25, 2019 at 4:35 AM
Thank you Gaz! For reading , liking, and responding.
Gauthier Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 8:48 AM
This can be read in several ways - as all good haiku and senryu.
Knowlton Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 9:21 AM
Thank you Line. Your responses are helping me better understand and write haikus.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 8:17 AM
Wait a minute... ;)
Knowlton Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 9:22 AM
OK…Now what? Lol…Thanks for reading Maureen.
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