Wedding Haiku I Love U

Devine bride in white

    floating down rose petaled aisle 

                                fountains of pleasure




01/13/2018
Contest Haiku- I love u
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Rodrigues Avatar
January 29, 2018 at 4:02 PM
Very pretty!
Pett Avatar
January 29, 2018 at 4:50 PM
Thanks Kim you’re very kind. :))
Ashley Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 8:27 PM
A beautiful Haiku Roy with lovely expression. Excellent imagery! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Pett Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 1:43 PM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment Susan, I really appreciate your support and encouragement. :))
Pandit Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 1:46 PM
I see the fountain..I feel the pleasure--well written, poem..best for a win, Roy.
Pett Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 6:24 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment Vijay, I propose a toast to you for your continued support which is really appreciated, thank you again. :))
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