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Wedding Bells Rang

Wedding bells rang this Early evening: We tossed seed Into air hued Lilac by shadow, Laughing with joy though Papa, he brooded, And Mama’s red cheeks Ran freshets of Tears, brine for the Years she pampered and Loved, cared for her girl, In hard times and good, Knowing one day Eros would call, Tempting our sis, whose Husband’s a fine guy who Earned our acceptance and Really deserved all our Expressions of cheer and Shouts of “Good Luck!” Now, let’s move back to the bar, Our newlyweds gone, let’s Toast, again, baby sister, One ravishing bride and Married (believe it?) On this fun, festive day, so Raise high your charged glasses and Roar with approval and let’s Open more bubbly, abolish the clock, and We’ll party like there’s no tomorrow. November 8, 2016 Wild Acrostic Poetry Contest (We Will Party Like There's No Tomorrow) Julia Ward, Sponsor

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Date: 11/13/2016 6:25:00 PM
Lovely imagery a wedding full of enjoyment, David, congratulations on your win in Julia's contest :)
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Date: 11/12/2016 12:16:00 PM
It's just one word, but it sums up what I want to express. Congratulations David!
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Date: 11/12/2016 10:02:00 AM
Congratulations David! You captured joy, love, emotion and appreciation in this write. Well done!!
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Date: 11/12/2016 3:41:00 AM
Congrats David, for your WIN in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 11/11/2016 4:12:00 PM
Nice approach to the theme, David, and a very well written Acrostic that flows so smoothly. Congratulations on your fine placement. Sandra
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Date: 11/11/2016 6:51:00 AM
Back to say, congrats!
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Date: 11/8/2016 8:51:00 AM
Love "freshets of tears". Enjoyed!
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Date: 11/8/2016 8:50:00 AM
Great one David! Good luck in the contest :)
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